Date: 2005-07-04 11:08 pm (UTC)
ariyanaforever: (Jin walking in the rain)
From: [personal profile] ariyanaforever
Tomoae pulled him onto the bed and he landed between him and the other woman.

I think you meant "he landed between her and the other woman."

I really liked the Mugen and Jin interaction and the Fuu/Jin interaction in this chapter. I think it was very true of them. Good job.
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