New Fic - Longing & Betrayal

Posted 3 chapters to fanfic.net. I made some changes in wording and dialogue due to sir_helling's suggestions in review. Thanks Lorena! Chapter 2 changes posted on fanction.net: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2134499/2/


Chapter 3 changes are here ( Longing & Betrayal - revised )