Birth of Mercenary - edited version
Oct. 14th, 2005 07:53 pmI finally got a chance to look at the beta work
ko0lchiki did for me. I also changed a few things myself. I think it reads better. Despite the title the sex is not my usual description smut at all. Very mild but I didn't write it as smut but to develop Pip err, character. XD Rated somewhere between teen and mature. Thanks so much
ko0lchiki for the edit! You are the best LJ-daughter.